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Wednesday, August 8, 2018

Meerkats Story


- In The Tumu Hub we have been learning about speech marks and apostrophe's, We learnt that the apostrophe combines words into one Example: it is - it's || Was not - Wasn't || Here is a Story I wrote using Apostrophe's 

Meerkats
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I wake up from my long nap, I get up and check if there was any fruit high in the tree's, I spot a Nice ripe fruit high up in the tree, I call my sibling's, they pop their head's up out of their holes and they spot the fruit too, we all go running for the fruit I see everyone rush ahead of me and scramble up the tree, we all take turn's trying to reach the fruit it’s no use so we all jump down and watch the fruit till it fall's, Suddenly I saw a the Eagles Shadow, me and my sibling's all charge for our hole's, The Eagle spots the fruit, he reaches out to grab it and only just got a grip of it, then he strongly flew off the branch with the fruit, We run after him, one of my brother's grab his foot and then we all jump on and grab on to each other, the Eagle was trying to bump us off then all of a sudden he flew into a cliff me and my sibling's fall the Eagle drop's the fruit, the fruit rolled down the cliff, I run over to catch it I got it firmly in my hands I pass it around to my sibling's, Suddenly we feel like we are in a rugby game we pass the fruit around and kick it into the goal, it hits the ground hard and bursts, me and my Siblings all stand there and look at the remains of the yummy fruit, we all head back home with our head's hanging down, and what’s that? Another ripe yummy fruit? We run up the tree and look at it I reach out to grab it suddenly it fall’s but luckily my brother was down there to catch it, he only just got it in his hands he looks at it weirdly and suddenly he eats it.
THE END


4 comments:

  1. Why did you do this

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  2. I love this because I like meerkats.
    Did you know meerkats are at orana park.
    Next time you could make it not as long.
    Why did you write about meerkats?

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  3. I love this because I love meerkats.
    Did you know my cat thinks she is a meerkat!
    Next time you could describe it more.
    Why did you write about meerkats?

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  4. Hi Sophie I’m Sophia T from Marshland school. I enjoyed the part when the meerkats played soccer with the fruit. Did you know that in some seasons . Some birds team up with the meerkats on smaller prey. Next time, you could try and use different words. Where did you get your inspiration? Please reply.

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